You have undertaken each stage, using appropriate terms. However, there is a tendency to be a little brief. For example, the analysis of students magaqzines could have been much more detailed, perhaps looking at other magazines... perhaps your planning could have had more evidence of you thinking through the options available to you.... I'm sure that for the main task, you will throw yourself into it and get alittle more detail. Moving in the right direction.
Josh, I can't see your front cover in your blog?
ReplyDeleteYou have undertaken each stage, using appropriate terms. However, there is a tendency to be a little brief. For example, the analysis of students magaqzines could have been much more detailed, perhaps looking at other magazines... perhaps your planning could have had more evidence of you thinking through the options available to you.... I'm sure that for the main task, you will throw yourself into it and get alittle more detail. Moving in the right direction.
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